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Annabelllll
That's a great story! It's well written and flows great! The plot is clear and its in an order where the reader can understand it very clearly! You did a great job!
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uurcool
Clown
so my first show was a bust
and I've lost your trust
and with the rain soon to come,
the metal will surly rust
but as I said before
I don't know what went wrong
all my guests left me
but I knew they'd leave all along
the man in the red light,
despite being far from me,
speak words that sound so right
but the clown tells me that he lies
the only clown on my show's name is frown
and he wears a red tie
his hair is red and his eyes are brown
and he drives all around town
he tells me not to listen to the man in the light
he says that the guests left because of him
because he gave them "such a fright"
I don't believe a word he says, though I know he's right
after he spoke, he gave me a hug
it felt so strange
then he screamed like he got stung by a bug
and disappeared into the dark
the man in the red light has him
I'll never get him back
this is all my fault, I distracted him
and now, a friend I lack
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uurcool
I made some more poetry if you want to read it. it kinda has a theme
sorry if it's too dark
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uurcool
I'll be there, dont worry
ill be wearing my red sweater and black pants
my hair may or may not be red, depends on if i want to dye it or not
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uurcool
woah, thats amazing! and thanks for the costume
I really like your poem! its well written and its beautifully worded!!